Sunday, April 8, 2012

I will not die without meeting you - 2

It’s taken me a long time to come up with a new post. These days I have not been trying much on the writing front. I had started on few, but then didn’t find them interesting enough and soon lost the track of what I was supposed to convey through my thoughts... Going through few of my old posts, I thought of writing a sequel to one of them - I will not die without meeting you! I personally believe the sequel has to be better than the first, and so it took a lot of time to think of it.I have scribbled something, but still I ain’t convinced with the outcome and I may never be coz I really loved the first one..So not thinking much on it, and leaving you guys to rate it, here’s my latest post -
 
Where were you?
 
I could hear some noise, I could hear people talking around me,
I wanted to open my eyes and see them but it looked quite difficult,
My eyes were heavy and I felt as if I was sleeping for years,
I opened my eyes slowly and carefully,
I could see my friends and family standing beside me,
All looking at me with a smile on their face and tears in their eyes,
They were happy to see me alive and I was happy to know that I would be able to see you !
 
I wanted to know where you were but didn’t had the courage to ask someone about you,
You know they never liked you, they always thought that you wanted to take me away from them,I asked them where they found me and how did I survive that stormy night,
They told me that it was you who saved me, it was you who brought me here,
It was you who made it possible for me to see another day,
And then everyone looked at the door as if they were expecting someone,
To my surprise, you entered the room!
You were wearing that white dress, which I had gifted you on your birthday,
Those diamond earrings which we had bought from the new jewellery outlet in the town,
And those white stilettos which you always wanted to wear on a special day,
Everyone hugged you and welcomed you!
 
I was overjoyed to see you and to see my friends and family accepting you,
You hugged me and whispered in my ears, “ thanks for making it till here,
thanks for keeping your promise, I wish I could also keep mine!
 
After saying this you just left the room and everyone looked sad and started crying,
I was unable to understand what was happening and why did you say so,
For a moment I felt something was terribly wrong,
Suddenly a thought crossed my mind,
You never wore those stilettos coz you could hardly walk with such high heels,
We never bought those earrings coz you always felt that they were too expensive,
And that white birthday dress? I never gifted you that as I had lost it in that stormy night,
So, so what was true? What was real? And where were you? Where were you?!

Here's the link to the first one - 
http://www.chhaviraina.blogspot.in/2010/02/i-will-not-die-without-meeting-you.html

3 comments:

  1. beautifully written! and that reminds we, we need 2 talk..:)

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  2. I don't know that what u ve written is ur thought or reality.but I one, thing I tell u that its very close to my story. Thanks for writing so reality and understanding the pain of lover.

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