It’s taken me a long time to come
up with a new post. These days I have not been trying much on the writing front.
I had started on few, but then didn’t find them interesting enough and soon
lost the track of what I was supposed to convey through my thoughts... Going
through few of my old posts, I thought of writing a sequel to one of them - I
will not die without meeting you! I personally believe the sequel has to be
better than the first, and so it took a lot of time to think of it.I have
scribbled something, but still I ain’t convinced with the outcome and I may
never be coz I really loved the first one..So not thinking much on it, and
leaving you guys to rate it, here’s my latest post -
Where were you?
I could hear some noise, I could
hear people talking around me,
I wanted to open my eyes and see
them but it looked quite difficult,
My eyes were heavy and I felt as
if I was sleeping for years,
I opened my eyes slowly and
carefully,
I could see my friends and family
standing beside me,
All looking at me with a smile on
their face and tears in their eyes,
They were happy to see me alive
and I was happy to know that I would be able to see you !
I wanted to know where you were
but didn’t had the courage to ask someone about you,
You know they never liked you,
they always thought that you wanted to take me away from them,I asked them where they found me and
how did I survive that stormy night,
They told me that it was you who
saved me, it was you who brought me here,
It was you who made it possible for
me to see another day,
And then everyone looked at the
door as if they were expecting someone,
To my surprise, you entered the room!
You were wearing that white dress,
which I had gifted you on your birthday,
Those diamond earrings which we
had bought from the new jewellery outlet in the town,
And those white stilettos which you
always wanted to wear on a special day,
Everyone hugged you and welcomed you!
I was overjoyed to see you and to
see my friends and family accepting you,
You hugged me and whispered in my
ears, “ thanks for making it till here,
thanks for keeping your promise, I wish I could also keep mine!
thanks for keeping your promise, I wish I could also keep mine!
After saying this you just left
the room and everyone looked sad and started crying,
I was unable to understand what
was happening and why did you say so,
For a moment I felt something was
terribly wrong,
Suddenly a thought crossed my
mind,
You never wore those stilettos
coz you could hardly walk with such high heels,
We never bought those earrings
coz you always felt that they were too expensive,
And that white birthday dress? I
never gifted you that as I had lost it in that stormy night,
So, so what was true? What was
real? And where were you? Where were you?!
Here's the link to the first one -
http://www.chhaviraina.blogspot.in/2010/02/i-will-not-die-without-meeting-you.html
Here's the link to the first one -
http://www.chhaviraina.blogspot.in/2010/02/i-will-not-die-without-meeting-you.html
beautifully written! and that reminds we, we need 2 talk..:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Nups :)
ReplyDeleteI don't know that what u ve written is ur thought or reality.but I one, thing I tell u that its very close to my story. Thanks for writing so reality and understanding the pain of lover.
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